Thursday, August 18, 2011

"Out of Place"?

Interesting, I like your poem, it is quite unique. I understand what you mean, sometimes I feel that way too. Sometimes things get too boring and you want to have something like a magical power to change something or just be somewhere else. I think you should extend your poem and write about the place where you want to be a little more, but I think it's really good! :)

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